The house on mango street essay.
For this essay I chose the prompt of how Esperanza is influenced by 3 other women in her life to be successful and rely on herself. My initial grade of this essay was 72 out of 100 and my final grade was the same because I was not able to revise my essay. I think some skills I mastered during this essay was the research aspect of if. While looking for proof to back up my claims while writing my essay I became fairly good at finding quotes and also messages that readers don't always notice while reading. I think a skill I could work on while writing my essay is the perspective in witch i write it in. Sometimes accidental switching from for example first perspective to third perspective without noticing is something I can improve on.